""Well, whaddaya gonna do now?" Meowth asked. "Ya got a lotta choices. None of 'em easy.""
...I don't know what it is, but something about this line bugs me. It's not that it's a bad line in itself but... it really just doesn't seem like it belongs in this fic, given that it's a dose of realism otherwise swamped with Mary Sueness.
"(Note: Dear Miss Falls- THE POKEMON WORLD IS NOT NECESSARILY CHRISTIAN! There's a REASON other fanficcers invoke Mew and Arceus!)"
That's true, but this tendency is unfortunately not limited to Cori Falls (hell, the fanfic "Girly Boy" ALSO has Meowth saying "Jesus Christ" at one point, but that story's so much better written I can overlook it).
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""Well, whaddaya gonna do now?" Meowth asked. "Ya got a lotta choices. None of 'em easy.""
...I don't know what it is, but something about this line bugs me. It's not that it's a bad line in itself but... it really just doesn't seem like it belongs in this fic, given that it's a dose of realism otherwise swamped with Mary Sueness.
"(Note: Dear Miss Falls- THE POKEMON WORLD IS NOT NECESSARILY CHRISTIAN! There's a REASON other fanficcers invoke Mew and Arceus!)"
That's true, but this tendency is unfortunately not limited to Cori Falls (hell, the fanfic "Girly Boy" ALSO has Meowth saying "Jesus Christ" at one point, but that story's so much better written I can overlook it).