""Well, whaddaya gonna do now?" Meowth asked. "Ya got a lotta choices. None of 'em easy.""
...I don't know what it is, but something about this line bugs me. It's not that it's a bad line in itself but... it really just doesn't seem like it belongs in this fic, given that it's a dose of realism otherwise swamped with Mary Sueness.
I think she lifted it straight out of a teen pregnancy pamphlet or afterschool special. Preachy as hell.
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...I don't know what it is, but something about this line bugs me. It's not that it's a bad line in itself but... it really just doesn't seem like it belongs in this fic, given that it's a dose of realism otherwise swamped with Mary Sueness.
I think she lifted it straight out of a teen pregnancy pamphlet or afterschool special. Preachy as hell.